Feedback for "Journey (Piano and Strings)" by Jonathan E Thomas

What I like most about this song

Hi Jonathan,

I like the performance of this instrumental.

I think you could improve this song by

This is good, although, the structure has song form elements whereas the request is for a "cue" structure. With a "cue", stay on the established motivic ideas throughout within an "A-A-A" structure. This track travels through sectional transitions which makes it difficult for a music editor if trying to cut a consistent attitude and flow of a specific scene.

I returned or forwarded this song because

The track has a pleasant feel, although, it veers from the desired character style of arrangement/structure requested in the listing.