Feedback for "Drifting (Piano and Strings)" by Jonathan E Thomas

What I like most about this song

Hi Jonathan,

I like the expressive performance of this instrumental.

I think you could improve this song by

Due to the waltz feel and the use of the rhythmic phrasing, this doesn't portray the desired sadness of the desired tempo and rhythmic phrasing of the references. Study the references and notice how the slow duple meter works best for this request.

I returned or forwarded this song because

The track has a deep emotional approach, although, it veers from the desired character style of arrangement referenced and requested in the listing.