Feedback for "Clouds We Call Home" by Jim Offerman
TAXI Listing S241229BE
What I like most about this song
Nice writing and playing. The cello ads a nice dimension to the piano.
I think you could improve this song by
Although the brief asks for minimal orchestration, the references they sent had a broader sound, nothing was this intimate.
I returned or forwarded this song because
Emulating the sound of the references that the client sent is a crucial part of connecting with them on a musical level.
Additional things I noticed...
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Listener ID: 396