Feedback for "Joy Above the Darkness" by Campbell Jeffrey Wilson
TAXI Listing S240822WW
What I like most about this song
The core of the track is promising. The woodwind melody is compelling and has great musicianship. Nice work, Campbell.
I think you could improve this song by
Could possibly have another woodwind instrumentation that can act as a counterpoint. The synth pad could be softer in general and this ending could be more sustained/offer more resolve.
I returned or forwarded this song because
I think this still has enough of what was needed.
Additional things I noticed...
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Listener ID: 452