Feedback for "LIVE IN THE 305" by We Sound as One
TAXI Listing S250327AY
What I like most about this song
The concept title and overall direction of the lyrics were fun and Miami leaning.
I think you could improve this song by
Song had a good appeal in the chord progression, but the general vocal, particularly the hype man, felt a bit outdated and lacked contemporary pop appeal. More latin flavor would help. Looking for stronger suited melodic hooks as well.
I returned or forwarded this song because
Song needed more contemporary appeal in the topline. Felt a bit lackluster melodically.
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Listener ID: 339