Feedback for "Into The Ring" by David Clipperton

What I like most about this song

I like the sounds, the groove and the intensity on here. Nice job with the overall production.

I think you could improve this song by

The groove is good, but your theme repeated too many times "as is" throughout. This needs more layers and more orchestration.

I returned or forwarded this song because

This has the right sounds and the right groove, but it's too repetitive and it needs more variation, more orchestration and more overall depth.

I would start more simple and sparse and leave yourself somewhere to build "to".