Feedback for "My journey to Johannesburg" by Andre Stepanian
TAXI Listing S201029AF
What I like most about this song
I like the assembly of sounds and the ideas here. Nice job with the guitar work.
I think you could improve this song by
I think this is good, but it needs more layers, more of a bass line at some point, and you could add more guitar. The marimba, djembe, & cabasa type groove is cool, but it needs to build and evolve a little more. I wouldn't scrap this, I would add to it and save it for another submission.
I returned or forwarded this song because
This needs more layers, more distinct sections, more build, and more overall developmental arc.
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Listener ID: 416