Feedback for "LOSS OF TIME" by Bradley Hagen

What I like most about this song

Hi Bradley,

I like the use of the harmonic tonality on this instrumental.

I think you could improve this song by

This is very good, yet the character sound of the sax is a bit off. For this request, try an alt-arrangement/mix and remove the sax and replace it with the guitar character used at the end. Utilize this guitar sound with minimal rhythmic motifs for the verses to maintain a cohesive linear sound. The foundation works well.

I returned or forwarded this song because

The track has a nice forward attitude groove, yet, it could benefit from a revision in the arrangement/instrumentation to get closer to the desired "1980's Yacht Rock" character style of arrangement/production sound as referenced by the client and requested in the listing.