Feedback for "CRACKS IN THE MIRROR (feat. Jay Stevens)" by Bradley Hagen
TAXI Listing S240227HR
What I like most about this song
Good underscore. I dig the more 90s style Hair Metal vibe. Cool subtle Angus Young style guitar elements.
I think you could improve this song by
This has potential. But it's too Pop Metal for this request. Chorus / Hook wise, this could be catchier / more compelling as well. Some vocal parts are a bit pitchy. I'd consider giving them another pass. The ending is also a bit abrupt. Button this up.
I returned or forwarded this song because
Chorus doesn't stand out enough.
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Listener ID: 419