Feedback for "FUNK YOU UP!" by Bradley Hagen

What I like most about this song

Hi Bradley,

I like the rhythmic feel of this instrumental.

I think you could improve this song by

This is good, although the structure veers from the desired "Cue" structure. With a "cue" structure, you want to stay on the "A" section throughout with forward development. No chorus or bridge. For this request, try an alt-arrangement and reduce the intro, create a "cue" structure utilizing the "A" section, and create a production mix that is similar to the references.

I returned or forwarded this song because

The track has a solid retro attitude, although, it could benefit from a revision in the arrangement/structure to get closer to the desired “Retro-inspired Pop/Funk” character style of arrangement/structure/production sound as requested in the listing.