Feedback for "Battle Cry" by Bradley Hagen
TAXI Listing S250707MA
What I like most about this song
Hey Bradley. Great energy on this one, it definitely has momentum.
I think you could improve this song by
refining the melodic phrasing, as there’s too much going on and it pulls focus. The cue could use more sectional development to create shape and evolution. It overall is not in the same wheelhouse as the references.
I returned or forwarded this song because
the cue lacks melodic restraint, doesn’t develop clearly, and misses the stylistic feel of the references. Strong energy, just needs more control and character to land.
Additional things I noticed...
(The comments below are just helpful suggestions and NOT necessarily the reason this music was forwarded or returned. Look at the top, right-hand dialog box that says, “I returned or forward this submission because” to see the reason for the Forward or Return.)
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Listener ID: 457