Feedback for "Sunflowers" by Jesse Shoresh Hose
TAXI Listing D230308EZ
What I like most about this song
The piano melody is lovely, and I think the vibe works nicely with what the listing request needs. The duration of the track complies with the listing as well.
I think you could improve this song by
I do think we could possibly use a different piano for this to blend well with the guitar. And I think the ending could have more of an anticipation and resolved tone. The tremolo of the guitar at 01:12 might not be necessary, or we can mix it in such a way that it would blend well with the other instruments.
I returned or forwarded this song because
This sounds great overall, however, the composition could use a bit more work.
Additional things I noticed...
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Listener ID: 452