Feedback for "Perkencity 1" by Ken Crombie / UtopiaSearchingMusic

TAXI Listing S240113UP

What I like most about this song

I like the blend of percussion styles and hits. Good energy, cool vocal elements and nice ear candy sprinkled throughout.

I think you could improve this song by

The synths around :31 come out of nowhere then just disappear. I'd lose this. The section around :47 - 1:00 / 1:08 - 1:17 is too Old School and feels out of place. Revamp these parts.

I returned or forwarded this song because

Needs to be more cohesive throughout.

Additional things I noticed...

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    Listener ID: 419