Feedback for "Energetic Percussive Instrumental Fun 2.0" by Ken Crombie / UtopiaSearchingMusic
TAXI Listing S231230PC
What I like most about this song
The opening part of the cue is fun, lively and upbeat.
I think you could improve this song by
Consider an edit without the mallet instrument. It's a bit too busy and stylistically and sonically off target with the examples. Incorporate more organic percussion and less Old School style electronic beats. For this specific style for ads and commercials, I'd loose the fast marimba / mallet instrument runs. Rework the section from 1:19 - 2:00 as well. It's too thin and sparse. The ending should be more exciting instead. The ending is anti-climatic and feels like a filler.
I returned or forwarded this song because
Needs a better arrangement and song structure.
Additional things I noticed...
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Listener ID: 419