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by John Braheny
The question comes up constantly. We hear 40-80 year-olds talking about
how they're not writing songs like they used to. As an interested observer
for many years, my view is that there has never been a shortage of "dumb"
songs and less than well-crafted, original songs on the charts (the
charts being a reflection of both sales and airplay). At the same time,
there have always been exceptional songs out there. There are several
factors that affect our reactions and judgement about what we hear.
- What you think is good is not necessarily what I think is good and
vice-versa. We each also have stylistic preferences that influence
us even when we make every effort to appreciate an unfamiliar style.
Some love country, some don't. You may have loved Black Sabbath and
can't stand Pearl Jam or vice/versa.
- Most music fans traditionally consider their favorites to be the
music that was popular among their peers when they were going through
their most emotionally significant changes (traumatic times). For
most, that's when they're in their teens and early twenties. I have
to remind myself that songs I thought were great when I was 16 don't
always fare so well now that I'm a much more discriminating listener.
As musicians and songwriters we're much more discriminating than the
general public. Maybe the song they were playing when my 11th grade
girlfriend left me for a jock was not the most powerful song ever
written. It only worked that way for me, and only then.
- Musicians also tend to favor and fixate on the style that first
inspired them to become musicians. Many also maintain a genre prejudice
that keeps them from learning to appreciate other types of music.
- A lyric is not a song is not a record. If you're a lyricist you'll
scrutinize the lyric and if you're a melody writer or groovemeister
and the melody or groove doesn't measure up to your creative standards,
you may ignore a great lyric. Basically, when you're a hammer, you
just look for a nail.
Two examples
of songs that we specifically heard our members mention recently are Cake's
"Never There" and Lenny Kravitz's "Fly Away." They couldn't figure out
what was appealing about these songs. So being someone who has always
tried to answer that question for myself, I'll wade into this for you.
Remember that the artists wrote these songs and consequently, have a lot
more creative leeway than writers who need to convince other artists to
record their songs.

CAKE"NEVER
THERE"
Words 3+, Music
4+
Cake is a California
group known for its eclecticism, musical adventurousness and its lyrical
humor and sarcasm. Those qualities alone are enough to make me predisposed
to like them. "Never There" is musically fresh. I don't hear anything
else out there like it. A spare, melodic funk bassline, tight live rhythm
section, unusual melody, lots of dynamics, a simple trumpet solo (Yes,
there's a real trumpet in the group.) and basically a variation of an
*ABCABC structure with the added interest of a spoken lyric (in "A").
I asked the students in my "Anatomy of A Hit" class at Musician's Institute
for their reaction to the song. Most didn't like it overall though they
liked the groove. Comments ranged from "Not my kind of thing" to "I didn't
like the vocal" to "lack of passion." It isn't the words themselves that
work, they're somewhat on the cliche side. What's appealing is the way
they're performed, phrased, varied, inflected.

KRAVITZ"FLY
AWAY"
Words 3, Music
3+
I've never been
a big Kravitz fan. I felt his early work was too derivative for my personal
taste. I do think he's a talented artist though, who is still growing.
So what makes this song "work." More to the point, "What makes this "record"
work. Pretty straight ahead predictable ABABAB with the 3rd "A" being
only 4 bars with no changes except a little different vocal treatment.
It was crying for a bridge that lifted it out of the predictability of
the groove. On the predictability/surprise scale there's way too much
predictability for me. Lyrics are predictable, cliched and over-rhymed.
What makes them work is the vocal phrasing and lyric density change going
from those short choppy phrases in the verse to that stretched-out "fly
away" and the Beatlesque "ahhhs" of the chorus. He's also an established
artist with an identifiable vocal sound and style which gives him a few
points on the familiarity scale and he sings those average lyrics like
he means them. He wrote the song to an existing track which can be problematic
if the person who did the track just basically looped a groove and didn't
build in any changes of chord progression or groove variation.
A note about
familiarity. Once an artist with an instantly recognizable vocal style
and sound gets success, they have a lot of creative leeway because fans
like to hear what they already know and recognize. The toughest thing
to market is a new artist with a new song.
Dynamics are
extremely important. The chart below shows a breakdown of the types of
dynamics used in the two songs.

|
Kravitz |
Cake |
| Change/Contrast Groove |
No |
Great |
| Change/Contrast Melody |
Yes |
Many |
| Change/Contrast Chord progressions |
No |
Yes |
| Change/Contrast Lyric Meter |
Yes |
Exceptional |
| Change/Contrast Lyric Density |
Yes |
Yes |

* Form (The first melodic section after intro is always "A" whether it's
a verse or chorus, second different melodic section is always"B" whether
it's a verse, bridge, pre-chorus or chorus; third different melodic section
is always "C: whether it's a chorus or bridge; etc.
John Braheny is
the author of "The Craft and Business of Songwriting" (Writers Digest
Books) a TAXI screener and a valued member of the TAXI A&R staff.

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